Children are not hindered by adult filters: Both lines are perfect: “The sun washes away the cold.”“I can’t see! The dark grabs it.”
I kept a collection of cute sayings for each of my grandchildren and have given the pages to them in their late teens. All of it bright and innocent, as children’s poetry and prose should be!
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Children are not hindered by adult filters: Both lines are perfect: “The sun washes away the cold.” “I can’t see! The dark grabs it.”
I kept a collection of cute sayings for each of my grandchildren and have given the pages to them in their late teens. All of it bright and innocent, as children’s poetry and prose should be!